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Jack Cameron's avatar

Solid beginning. I like the morally gray protagonist. Pacing was perfect. Kept the story moving. I'm looking forward to next week's installment.

J. Edward Hunter's avatar

Thank you! I hope you enjoy part II. Though I’m he homely interested in where people see the flaws. I’ve seen a lot of them in this story over the years which is why I’ve never submitted it anywhere. But I love the concept and characters.